Saturday, 25 October 2008

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windblown willow tree -
twenty long tailed tits leap
from branch to branch

11 comments:

kouji haiku said...

lovely image and alliteration. :)

The Weaver of Grass said...

Long tailed tits - one of my favourite birds. Love the image.

egretsnest said...

Gorgeous image.

Janice Thomson said...

Love the analogy of the long tails and long willow leaves - wonderful!

Dave King said...

A really telling verse.

Art and Poetry said...

I like it! its nice

polona said...

that's lovely

i watched these birds just yesterday in the park... well, actually i heard them before i could see them dahing from limb to limb

seth said...

Wonderfully lyrical verse. I love your banner photograph as well. Thank you too for your nice comment on my blog.

Cynthia said...

Pretty visual,this haiku is wonderful
on the tongue.

Billy said...

I agree with Janice. I love the analogy! Beautiful!

holly said...

I adore your haikus. Hope you get a book together!